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In the letterbox today: A letter from Deutsche Rentenversicherung.

Author: Dr. Michael Zeisig · First published: 4 August 2025

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In the letterbox today:

A letter from Deutsche Rentenversicherung.

6 pages. Three enclosures.

Subject: “Employer audit under Section 28p of Book IV of the German Social Code” – sounds like sleepless nights.

The result in plain language:

Everything is in order.

No additional payments.

No further steps required.

Please file away (-> better still: archive digitally!)

Done. One paragraph. Six lines.

How did I work that out?

I scanned the six pages, uploaded them to ChatGPT and asked:

“Can you please translate this into normal German?”

Two seconds later, I had the answer.

Why six densely printed pages have to be sent for this is probably known only to the German administrative apparatus itself.

What I do know: This is exactly where one of our country’s biggest modernisation problems lies – unnecessary complexity, a flood of paper and jargon.

My conclusion:

In business, this would be unthinkable – meanwhile, the state keeps writing six pages where six lines would suffice.

And wonders why digitalisation and citizen-friendly services are not progressing.

It is time to fundamentally overhaul our administrative apparatus:

From officialese to plain language.

From a flood of paper to pragmatism.

Anything else is no longer in keeping with the times.

💬 A question for you:

When did you last receive a letter from a public authority that could have been explained in three sentences?

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